by Sydney
Twisted ending there! I was completely drawn to it. Wonderful. XD |
Wow, your poems are catching my eyes.. I love it... |
Wow this was sooo freaky.. it reminded me of a grieving husband who lost his wife and is know seeing her in his dreams and stuff maybe like a ghost.. Wonderful job. I loved it. |
Wow this was sooo freaky.. it reminded me of a grieving husband who lost his wife and is know seeing her in his dreams and stuff maybe like a ghost.. Wonderful job. I loved it. |
by Marc Ortiz
This is a very powerful poem! great imagery! flow was good! I like the ending! I really enjoyed this one! good job! 5/5! |
by Vanessa
For he had berried his wife long ago |
Wow, unexpected ending, deserved that 5/5 |