Oh!...so true!stephen,Great write!...so beautifully written..u've made the whole thing simple and to the point..and ver very true too...Nice work!
kp it up!
xxPoojaxx

Truth behind it and it was very powerful XD. Nice job! Keep it coming! ^_^

Aww very encouraging poem! The messages was just amazing! And surely touches everyone of us! Beautiful poem. Keep up the great work!

This was a well done poem the message was great and uplifting the oddest thing I would have to ask why did you put it in the dark poems. Ithink it sould have been in the inspiring ones just a thought Plot121

Another well done job, excellently written. It was insiring, and the message was clear. Great job, and keep up the good work.5/5

The message was clear and good
But the flow was off because of the structure
The second line got a bit old for me
but it made the poem see the light
in the end
so nice job

Ok, I really like this poem but if you condense the lines in the very beginning, without formatting it as a line, then the title, line, title, etc...you could condense it down to two or three lines then the title. I think it will have more impact if it were formatted that way. I do like the poem though, it sends a great message! 5/5

Amazing poem! well done! I like the repetition style! flow was a little off but its a great poem! I enjoyed reading this one! good job!

Great poem not to powerful but just right keep it up!!!!!

I didn't like how un-structured the poem was. I suppose that might just me being old-fashioned, but it's what I prefer reading. I thought the repetition was a little overused. It was OK at the start, but then just got a little too much.

Overall though, interesting to read, as always.

"But even though youre afraid It doesnteally matter, for" There should be a period after afraid, and a comma after the N in doesn't and a space between doesn't and really. I know just some stupid typos but you should fix them anyway. I really liked this poem it was the first one that I've read of its kind. I really liked how you broke it up and you explained that courage is more than just doing the right thing, its about being able to push through your hardships and continue on at life. Nice work.

I find it a bit repetitive,
But it had very good visuals.
It was inspiring and I like how it rounded off at the end.