That short red slash

Wow this poem was different that a lot of the traditional cutting poems that I've read before. I liked how you showed a different angel on this. Not wanting to follow through but not knowing what else to do, epsecially when everyone else is already gone. I also liked how you ended the poem the same way as you started talking about the short red slash. Nice job.

I know wut its liek ti hard butt u gotta be stong any way great poem5/5

The flow was a little off! But this is a great poem! very powerful! uhm you have to change something

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there just edit it to remove the weird 'thing'

TC I enjoyed this poem! well done!

The topic of your poem isn't particularly clear until the very last couple of lines, and that could either be a good thing or a bad thing. Readers may be slightly confused reading your poem because the flow is somewhat interrupted but it's still good. I look forward to reading more of your work, 5/5.

I know how you feel.
It's like everyone does it now
Like a trend almost
Sometimes I don't know if a lot of those ppl
Even have issues
but I'm sorry you feel pressured and alone
I know how that feels
Great poem