This 1 is great ..beautiully penned dark poem filled with emotions...simple and Beautiful...kp up the good work!
5/5!
xxPoojaxx

Deep emotion. Nice poem XD. lol i want to say goregeous instead of beautiful since everyone uses that so it was gorgeous! XD. ha. Overall it was great.

Great poem. I like the way you repeat lines and that makes it so good. Emotions in it were great! I love the way you write. Keep up the great work!

You have such great talent...5/5

The word play was good but the flow was really off I had to reread alot of this to get the whole picture.you may neot want to put an apastrophy in the poems becsae it creates a big proble with the poem. Other then that keep on Writing Plot121

The word play was good but the flow was really off I had to reread alot of this to get the whole picture.you may neot want to put an apastrophy in the poems becsae it creates a big proble with the poem. Other then that keep on Writing Plot121

Diffrent, not chliche, not by a long shot, but the flow is a little bit off, the word choice is of course brillantly diffrent, and the emtion was deep, dark and strong.

I know how you feel.
It's like everyone does it now
Like a trend almost
Sometimes I don't know if a lot of those ppl
Even have issues
but I'm sorry you feel pressured and alone
I know how that feels
Great poem

The topic of your poem isn't particularly clear until the very last couple of lines, and that could either be a good thing or a bad thing. Readers may be slightly confused reading your poem because the flow is somewhat interrupted but it's still good. I look forward to reading more of your work, 5/5.

The flow was a little off! But this is a great poem! very powerful! uhm you have to change something

they�?�¢??ve

there just edit it to remove the weird 'thing'

TC I enjoyed this poem! well done!

I know wut its liek ti hard butt u gotta be stong any way great poem5/5

Wow this poem was different that a lot of the traditional cutting poems that I've read before. I liked how you showed a different angel on this. Not wanting to follow through but not knowing what else to do, epsecially when everyone else is already gone. I also liked how you ended the poem the same way as you started talking about the short red slash. Nice job.