This poem was brilliant the title seams sinister and yet the poem has a lot of humor I really likes this piece.

Excellent poem. Great use of imagery. This poem is so unique and I commend you for that. This poem was amazing. Different than any I've read before. Breathtaking and so powerful. 5/5

-Shannon <3

WOW! i've never read something like this.. the way you told your story was very unique because of the way you wrote this poem.. this is one of the best poems i've ever read.. everything was detailed and very intriguing to read... wow you're good!

That was..... so unique.... I can't find another word to describe it like that does. You don't see something like this anywhere. It was so well written and so scary all at the same time. I can't believe your use of words in this poem. So strong and make the poem really stick... You have a lot of talent keep up the work!

Wow simply amazing. Going on my favorites for sure. A wonderful dark tale, very enjoyable. It flowed majestically and the storyline sucked in my full attention. 5/5 keep up the wonderful writing

This poem is really really excellent job. I really love the title, the flow and this is very well worded. Another superb job by you, nothing to complain, 5/5

Wow old poems can come back even better!! it was an amazing read and i like how you describe the setting in your poem. 5/5 !props!

Very, very good. I love it. Using death symbolically is a very good idea and you use it well. The repeated question at the beginning and end is good too. Making us think about it at first and then revealing more insight to the question and who its about as the poem goes along. 5/5 <3<3

I LOVED THIS!!
it makes me want to go on a date with the devil.
how dark and demonic this poem was really appealed to me.
the rhyming technique and wording were amazing.
5/5

It was very dark, good write

Wow that was a great poem ! Its wierd ccuz i have a friend named stephanie taylor just change the n to a t =] it was a fantastic poem !

Chilly, lovely. Wicked poem! Written it fantastically. Great imagery. Good JoB! 5.5

Wow. Amazing. The flow was flawless and your descrptions and imagery were outstanding. .And the intensity of this piece was well and the emotions were portrayed greatly. Well written and well thought out. 5/5 indefinitely.

Loved this write ...
very unique concept and well narrated ... i sense you have tried to explain some deep thoughts throught this write ... very dark powerful write ...

""Have You Ever Died?"
With dead-serious eyes, you asked,
With a little laugh
To make it like you were joking.
Yeah, you were breath-taking; "

^^loved the intensity in these lines...

wonderfully penned...