Ohhh. Your words were splendid! Awesome job! XD

Oh wow..I love this poem...thank you for commenting mine...I appreciate it... I have seven new ones on there that nobody has commented...

Natalie

The use of your description was great I loved the last line it summed it so well a great write keep it up

This is a great poem. my favorite of all of yours. 5/5

Wow I am speechless. I love this. The word choice is simply amazing, the emtions are deep and strong, and the flow is flawless. Youd di an excellt job, on a peice well written. 5/5

This one has a great flow and you also choiced a great chocie of words i wish i was this good!!!!

Good poem! Flow was good! and great choice of words! well done! keep it up! you have talent :)

Great job not my type of poem but still good

This poem is very interesting in a excellent way. the words are phrased ad set up just write to make you ponder . very deep job well done!

This poem is very interesting in a excellent way. the words are phrased ad set up just write to make you ponder . very deep job well done!