Easier To Run {CinqTriosDecaLa Rhyme}

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   May 13, 2007


I actually really dislike this, but we all have our off poems, eh? =]
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It's easier to run into the nightmares of tomorrow.
The wrong seems right in this messed up, f'd up world of sorrow.
You're beautiful when you cry, and on those nights I'll hold you tight;
I want to make you even more gorgeous, I want to make it right.
Take your time and cry on my shoulder and let it all out;
You're more perfect than you think and I'm here to stop that doubt.
We'll teach you to stand on your own and on life's road make a new route;
You're my angel and if need be, my heart I'll let you borrow.
It's getting colder, but hold on tight, the nightmares stop tonight,
In my arms you will stay though it's easier to run, no doubt.
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The CinqTroisDecaLa Rhyme, a form created by Laura Lamarca, consisting of one 10-lined stanza.
The rhyme scheme for this form is AABBCCCABC and a syllable count of each line is 15.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Robert

    I am sorry the whole poem seemed to go everywhere with no real grounded thought first you loved it when they cried then you wanted to ease thier suffering it just seem to be contredictory from one line to another oh weel nice try. If you ask me I think I would stay with one central thought and stick with it. Plot121

  • 17 years ago

    by Biscuit

    A very emotive poem but im not too sure that the form really works...
    im not a great fan of such rigidly structured poems though as i dont feel they allow much individual expression, so im perhaps not the best judge of this poem. it feels to me like you've written it to fit with the form, which makes it seem a little forced...
    but theres some nice metaphors 'the nightmares of tomorrow' gives a good opening line.
    and theres several contrasts here as well 'the wrong seems right', 'you're beautiful when you cry', 'stay though its easier to run', i like these as they add depth and ambiguity to the poem and challenge the expectations of the reader.

    kim xx

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