A very emotive poem but im not too sure that the form really works...
im not a great fan of such rigidly structured poems though as i dont feel they allow much individual expression, so im perhaps not the best judge of this poem. it feels to me like you've written it to fit with the form, which makes it seem a little forced...
but theres some nice metaphors 'the nightmares of tomorrow' gives a good opening line.
and theres several contrasts here as well 'the wrong seems right', 'you're beautiful when you cry', 'stay though its easier to run', i like these as they add depth and ambiguity to the poem and challenge the expectations of the reader.

kim xx

I am sorry the whole poem seemed to go everywhere with no real grounded thought first you loved it when they cried then you wanted to ease thier suffering it just seem to be contredictory from one line to another oh weel nice try. If you ask me I think I would stay with one central thought and stick with it. Plot121