"All the smiles and all the tears
All our dreams and all our fears

All the promises that we made
All these feelings that will fade"

^^Wonderful lines =)

wow!!beautifu poem..the repetition added beauty to your wrk...n lol..i can relate too..n perfect rhyme scheme too...n the way u split the poem in to doublets gave the poem a good look....kp it up!
5/5!
xxPoojaxx

Another great job by you.......
if they ask me to choose the best poet for perfect flow and rhyme, i will choose you as your all poems are great in flow and rhymes.
you are truly very talented.
keep it up
another 5/5 from me