You seem to be getting a lot of inspiration from the news, or newspapers better to say.. I like that a lot! from what I have read so far you prefer to shine a light on subjects supressed and in desperate need of attention, rather than to write about yourself.. but then again I have not read all of your poems (yet!)

I am again very impressed by this piece of work.
I must say I had to read this poem twice, because the first time I coulnd't quite catch on to the flow of the poem.. It doesn't matter.
this is one of those poems, the more you read it, the better it becomes.
you did a great job in writing it, and I am looking forward to reading more of your work.

sincerely,
~*natasha*~

This is one is great too... I ABSOLUTLY LOVE your poems... They are great...
This one is rlly sad too... i give you 5/5!!
-*skyler*-

Hey yer well this is good real good and like i understand it in more wayss then 1.
itz like yer speechless coz my life similar in a way so yer it made me cry.
neway it kool
byebye
xOx
amber

That was a really good poem even though sad i casn feel lots of emotion
5/5

Wow,i can relate to the abuse,and i luv this poem,such a good meaning

Wow that is really amazing. those kids will deffinately be in my prayers tonight

Awwwwwww this is a really sad poem.....
But I think its great. 5/5

Omg this is the most saddest poem iv ever seen! im almost crying it was so sad but so well with emotion! i love it it makes me want to save all the kids who get abused! I LOVE THIS POEM!

A truly amazing yet so sad. It's unfortunate that this sort of thing happens right beneath our noses, yet we turn our heads unaware. It's so sad.

I truly loved the last stanza, it was a beautiful ending. So much emotion. The whole thing just draws you in and then you just don't want to stop.

Amazing. XoOrdinaryGirlxO

Congratulations on coming second in my poetry contest with this poem.

I just have to say it was one of the most saddest poems I have seen so far on this site.

It really broke my heart to know it was based on a true story and what makes it even sadder is its not the only time it will happen.

I have people who are in this type of situation in my thoughts and thank you for bringing it to my attention.

Sometimes we go through life always thinking of ourselves or who we know and dont care to think about the people who are in horrible situations or people who are crying out for help.

Truly a beautiful poem and you should be proud of your poetry, what I have seen so far is gorgeous.

well done
^_^

This made me tear up. :(

That's horrible that anyone would have to go through something like this. I guess it really shows you how cruel people can be.

This was a wonderful poem. not only was it full of emotion but each line flowed so well that it kept my attention throughout the whole thing. (I'm easily sidetracked, haha.) I'll pray that anyone going through this sort of thing will make it out okay and become stronger in the long run. I'm thankful to have the life that I have, this was a real eyeopener. Great job, I look forward to reading more of your work.

- Jessica