Comments : Wow

  • 17 years ago

    by Im not broken anymore

    I loved it but the end kinda seemed weird but its very good.. Great job...

  • 17 years ago

    by azii

    Great one i loved it. You could just fix this one:

    Plow me into the ground

    Plow me and watch me bleed

    Plow me into it that hard because....
    .... I never knew that my life sucked this hard.

    Amazing poem. 5/5
    take care

  • 17 years ago

    by JaM

    Great work. Although you've been told it could be "fixed" I found it to be an amusing ending, how blunt and simple it was.