Comments : A Sad Story

  • 17 years ago

    by lizzle

    Great poem!!it was sooo goood!!i loved it!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Moving, very touching, and very very sad. It almost made me cry. The word choice was wonderful, although a couple of the rhymes felt a little forced, but the emtion in this make that easy overlooked. I was engrossed, with every stanza. well written, I love your work. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by LOS

    Nice poem...