by lizzle
Great poem!!it was sooo goood!!i loved it!! |
by Vanessa
Moving, very touching, and very very sad. It almost made me cry. The word choice was wonderful, although a couple of the rhymes felt a little forced, but the emtion in this make that easy overlooked. I was engrossed, with every stanza. well written, I love your work. 5/5 |
by LOS
Nice poem... |