New Love

by skynerraw   May 14, 2007


This new love
He's as fair as a dove
I look at his face
His call from grace
He's single so to speak
I hope this news won't leak
That I might ask him out
I might start to shout
At whoever told him
Make their next moments grim
But during homeroom I stare
Hoping my heart he won't tear (rip)
His perfect smile
I haven't seen it in a while
His soft brown hair
Shines as he sits there
He flirts with me more than any
But that he does with many
So what do I do?
Can I trust advice from you?
My best friends don't even know
I hope this infatuation doesn't show
I love them they're my dears
But this guy has me reduced to tears
I can't show them I'm weak
If the tears start to leak
This new love

*-Sky-*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenna

    Oh i really like this A LOT!
    its soooo sweet...i've felt that way b4 too!
    GREAT JOB!

  • 17 years ago

    by CHOKE

    I hate how guys like flirt with everyone and you don't know if he likes you or not. that's like so confusing, and pretty frustrating. anyway, 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    That was cute, really rather sweet. Again well done, at any age. the flow was great, but a couple of the lines felt a little forced, but the e,tion was strong enough to cover it. great job 5/5. Helpful hint: to tell if the poem seems forced read it outloud a couple of times.. thats how I figured it out.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Nice work
    I liked the beginning
    I agree with a lot of ppl
    who commented this

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Lol.....sweet work!!...well expressd and good choice of words...very sweet poem..so true!..lol...kp it up!
    xxPoojaxx

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