Lol.....sweet work!!...well expressd and good choice of words...very sweet poem..so true!..lol...kp it up! |
by Kaila
Nice work |
by Vanessa
That was cute, really rather sweet. Again well done, at any age. the flow was great, but a couple of the lines felt a little forced, but the e,tion was strong enough to cover it. great job 5/5. Helpful hint: to tell if the poem seems forced read it outloud a couple of times.. thats how I figured it out. |
by CHOKE
I hate how guys like flirt with everyone and you don't know if he likes you or not. that's like so confusing, and pretty frustrating. anyway, 5/5. |
by Jenna
Oh i really like this A LOT! |