by Midnight Sun May 14, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
Her dark hair covered her shamed face as she cried liquid fire. If you looked in her eyes, passed the ivy covered wall, you'd see her shattered spirit. |
Wow that was really intense....i definitly felt something....good job! |
by *Charisma*
Unusual but full of vivid descriptions and that's why i liked it. The ending kind of lost me though...like i'm not sure what you meant. Maybe I'll have to reread it a few times...or you can email and tell me! |
by Gem
"Her dark hair covered her shamed face as she cried liquid fire." |