This was good. Its a bit short but you got your point across.
Your flow and Rhyme were good although the flow was off in some places.. i will give this a 5/5 because everyones first poems are the best.

Aww thats so cute ^_^ I can tell this poem was written from your heart. Very well done! Xx Chrissie

Aww. cute poem. ;) keep it up! :)
You take good care. and god bless you always.

Aww simple and cute! Flow was good and message was easy to understand :) And im sure it meens more to you than ever can for readers! Keep up the good work!
5/5