by Amanda
That was sweet, it makes me wish I was a mom. |
Good poem. |
by lizzle
Thats a great poem!!it reminded me of me and my mom!5/5 |
Good poem, nice flow |
Very sweet I loved it, first stanza a little cliche sounding but other than that well done. Great mother's day poem. Thought college should be through college. 4/5 |
Wow this soundes like the relationship i have with my mom. great work of poetry. you have a great gift. you know how to express you emotion in your poems so that readers can imagine and get a clear picture in there head. great work.5/5 |
Very sweet poem...it fowed perfectly and it's touching indeed..n lol...it reminds me of me n my mom.....Great work.kp it up! |
by Taylor Lyn
This is a cute poem..I like the premise of it but I think you could reword it a little bit for maximum effect. Nonetheless, good poem! :) |
by Live WeLL
Aww what a sweet poem.. i really enjoyed it.. great job and keep it up.. thanks for the comment =] |
by Jenni Marie
This is beautiful....so moving and touching, it really pullled me into the poem after reading the first few lines. |
Aww.. this is soo sweet.. a very enjoyable read.. the flow was fantastic as well as the wording.. keep it up :D |
by Startle Me
Everything you are[[,]] I truly look up to you. |
This one flowed straight from the heart very touching |
by Teria
Look up to you.< take out you. |
Very sweet job. It's always nice to read about somebody feeling appreciation towards a family member. I really enjoyed reading. |
by BreeAnna
The message was pleasant and sweet. good job. I dont have a mother, this makes me feel like I am missing out on a lot. good job |
by RetroRavey
I liked that one. 5/5 |
5/5. really nice poem... |