Greatly penned, the poem started off satisfactery getting stronger as it went, and ending it off with a very powerful stanza. The poem was amazing, though, to imporve, you might want to work on the stanza,

"But I'm still satisfied
For I see her in my dreams
Though I don't talk to her
I talk to her in my dreams"

all in all, great poem!

5/5

Lmao this is awesome. I can totally understand what you are saying. Loved the rhymes and the way you have structured it.

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The feelings behind this piece was great and the mood you set was very well done. The structure was good and all and all I enjoyed reading it Plot121

This poem is so touching n lovely. I ENJOYED reading it.
keep it up