Comments : Cannot Feel

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Eyes finding a victim
    Something clicks in his brain
    If his thoughts could be heard
    He'd be diagnosed insane.
    Perfect choice of words...and amazingly powerful lines.

    Excellent work...i so guess u r gonna win the contest with this masterpeice of yors...loved it...well written dark poem!!...5/5!
    xxPoojaxx