Comments : TO BE WITH THE ONE I LOVE!

  • 17 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Wow! im speachless this was worth waiting for!! :) you should write more often :) and ive decided that you should :P so yep get to it! lol :) loved it 99/5 as always :))))

  • 17 years ago

    by Cathy

    Very nice poem Kelly! I'm glad you got the chance to get on here! This poem is a little scary, only because dreaming about something that weve done in the past really does feel like something is trying to get us to experience it again. Are you getting what I'm trying to say? Lol I don't know you explained it in the poem perfectly! Anyways I hope everything is good with you, and hope you get another chance to get on here again soon! Take care.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I'm so glad that this poem had a happy ending!
    I was feeling a mix of emotions while reading this and it felt like a wieght was lifted when i read the last stanza.
    Losing someone is always so hard but they stay with us inside =)
    5/5 m'dear
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent poem , great job and wording was very good nice flow , very sad and a good ending, I know what you are going through, it's hard I know going through it now myself , great job , will be watching you~5/5~ your friend Tracy