It is pretty good. I just think that you should space it out more to fix the flow of the words. Other then that you get your emotion across wonderfully!

The last stanza is great. I like this poem.

'Numb' Good word to use. Very true. I really like your poems (:

I like your poems

I like a lot this poem because you managed to describe the same feelings I had in certain moments of my life.Congratulations,you have done a great work.Take care of you.Best regards,Michelle. 5/5 for sure
p.s. : Tinkerbell rocks :D