Great poem. I liked the overall concept because it had meaning and wasn't completely random. I think you did a good job with the rhymeing in the poem. 5/5

This is nice. it could have better structure though but otherwise 5/5. great work once again

Wow. This is a very unique write. The flow was great and the wording was perfect. I like the meaning of it and the way you put it into words. Great job...5/5
Tyanna

The last line was my favorite. this poem was amazing. really the flow was great, the word choice was exceptional, and the emtion was powerful . keep up the good work, 5/5

Very different peice..yet i liked the way it ws penned..filled wth emotions...it had a meaning behind..n i liked tht=)
Good write..lol..another 5/5 as always!
xxPoojaxx

Oh wow..this is some powerful work..... its really amazing.... i was drawn in by reading the first few lines..

great job and EXCELLENT ending. 5/5