by Brittany C May 14, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
new love
As sweet as can be |
by Kaila
Hah how many times have i heard a poem like this mix it up a bit sweetheart and do something nrw |
Wow!...great work...beautifully portrayed love thru this one....the message was conveyed in a simple n effective way..n the flow was good too...n thepoem over all...is sweet! |
For some readon this poem made me laugh not becasue it stupid.. for some reason it connected to me and my first boyfriend.. it reminded me when I was young.. I really liked it becasue most poeple was able to realate to that and the flow just moves .. it made me feel like calling my ex.. lol |
by Melpomene
The message portrayed throughout this poem was clear and meaningful.I found this poem to be quite sweet and cute portraying love nicely. Well done with this good effot~Mel |
by Vanessa
The emtion was strong, and the message was clear, Another well done job by you. 5/5 |