Oh wow that was really good. The flow was good, A LOT of emotion in it and the ending was perfect. Very well done!!

Man, I wish I could right like you. I'm at the stage where every time I try to write something it screws up. I can't get it out it's like I'm trapped in a corner and there is no way out.
Keep it up!!
xx Rox

Ohhh.. ashlie, i know you'll be fine.. you guys are so sweet together, and you show your love in this poem so well.
5/5
gabriella