Fontanel of Tears

by debbylyn   May 14, 2007


Mementos dealt in wasted years
Blessed fontanel of tears
Assuaged with jaded confidence
Lonely cries the recompense

Gifts of angst and misery
Bestowed with generosity
Tired brow in sadness weeps
Weary friend in comfort keeps

Dark entrenched a soul's lament
Cloths of Heaven bleak and rent
Coldest slab in deep repose
Bled and dry false lover's rose

Blow the gale of heartache's sorrow
Mourning tree of lost tomorrows
Marble writ in torment rests
Chosen path of no regrets

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  • 17 years ago

    by Mr M

    So good it left me dizzy....

  • 17 years ago

    by thandie

    Hey this poem is awesome.. i simply loved the way it worked so perfectlyyyy....its perfectly fluent..
    keep it up :)
    great work and can you check out some of my poems and tell me what you think.thankz....and 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ann

    This piece well examines the dimly lit place of the heart, more commonly known as “the void”; one of the abuses from which the void feeds comes from giving and not receiving, and placing unwarranted trust in someone.

    You give into its dark ambiance masterfully. This embossment attracts me with its sweet sorrow.

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    I could feel u through this poem. Really nice. 5/5. Always remember every cloud has a silver lining. tc

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow that was depressing and really good, nice flow. 5/5

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