by omgitsmina May 14, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Anger, lust, envy, bitterness, and greed |
It sounds like some badass metal song. |
Very good.. well done.. keep up the good style |
by shawn
I love the way you worded the repetitive chorus type stanza, and the grammer was great, it's rare to find a peice overall that is as well writen as this. 5/5 |
by Roxy
Wow, I am speechless. I really enjoyed reading this poem the vocabulary was amazing. Never seen something like this in my life!! xxxMuch love from Roxy Keep up the amazing work xxxx |
This is an amazing poem that exposes the darknes to the light of truth ...well written |