Really enjoyed this one
i loved how you repeated that line in every other stanza "anger, lust, bitterness, and greed" it fortifies the poem

awesome
5

Love it. it was well, it left me speechless. I love dark literature adn you definately embrace the shadow within. 5/5 kep it up

Wow that was excellent. The repitition of the one stanza worked really well. Everything about this is flawless, the flow reads smoothly, the rhyming doesn't seem forced at all, and the vocab is perfect. The vocab stood out the most to me. Well done. 5/5

Tammie

I will look up the wiccan site you mentioned. Love your poems, and that quote about the razor and the wicked twist, have to add you to my favourites, your a real talent
Elisha

Very strong passion great use of words this is an osm piece 5/5

laura

This is an amazing poem that exposes the darknes to the light of truth ...well written

Wow, I am speechless. I really enjoyed reading this poem the vocabulary was amazing. Never seen something like this in my life!! xxxMuch love from Roxy Keep up the amazing work xxxx

I love the way you worded the repetitive chorus type stanza, and the grammer was great, it's rare to find a peice overall that is as well writen as this. 5/5

Very good.. well done.. keep up the good style

It sounds like some badass metal song.