So true, so true. i loved it.

The poem was great you made it do everything you said and still held it together with a stanza and meanning congrads!!! PLot121

Oh I like this one. Very well written, the imagery speaks for itself :). However, I'm not too sure about the line: "the birds with wings"- it doesn't seem to fit as well as everything else in the poem. Although, I currently have no alternatives in my head to suggest to you. I'll have to get back to you when I think of something! Haha, very well done on this one, anyway :)!

I loved how this was short but made a point. it kind of ended without even giving the poem an ending though. you know what i mean? but still good job. 4/5

I loved it! Its excellent! Well written, with a great, true point. I really liked the style of the poem, the Acrostic thing. Loved it :D Keep up the good work!

I really liked the content of this one. And such flawless flow!!! Great job! 5/5

Josie