Unfaithful

by Infected with His Deadly Love   May 14, 2007


She takes his hand as they walk side by side
Caressing his hand, their love they can not hide
Under the moonlight, such a lovely night
To be here now, it just feels right

She doesn't know what he has planned
Kissing her softly, as they sit on the sand
A picnic is waiting, already set out
He longs for an answer, a "yes" without a doubt

He hands her a gift, "Happy valentines day"
As she opens it, all her worries fly away
He takes her hand and gets on his knees
"I love you Sarah, will you marry me please?"

She jumps up and screams out "Yes!"
He kisses her sweetly, she is his Princess
He will always love her and never be unfaithful
For she will be his wife, his little Angel.

©Sarah Elliott 2007

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  • 17 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    Sorry about the above. My computer's a bit screwy :)

    Anyway, i really like this poem. It has that happy ending that I am So looking for in my life!

    Note: "He will always lover her and never be unfaithful"
    "To be here now, it just feel right"

    In the first line, shouldn't it be "love" instead of "lover".
    In the second line, "feel" should be "feels"

    Fantastic write!!! 5/5

    Josie

  • 17 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    To be here now, it just feel right
    He will always lover her and never be unfaithful

  • 17 years ago

    by Miranda HEARTCORE

    Well, you tricked me, with the name. oh, how i thought it'd be about he/her breaking the others heart. i loved it though! it was so awesome!!

  • 17 years ago

    by skynerraw

    Awww...It's such a sweet poem, beautifully written, amazing story, I think it is amazing :D keep up the GREAT work :D

  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    Awhh this was sweet. i love poems that tell a story. i also loved the rhyming pattern that this poem had. you did a wonderful job 5/5

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