This was good. my only thing i see is.. maybe you can put it into stanzas that seems to always work.. lol anyway good job 5/5

Amazing poem, touching yet beautiful......loved the writing and the format

---lots of love tara

I truly love this poem...it tells a lot of your love for your mum...great piece of work...keep writing

I really like this one... its very touching... <3

Hey, hows it going? I really loved this poem, it had depth and emotion which made me really enjoy it! Well penned, keep the great writting up! 5/5

Chan
-xx-

Aw, very sad but you did a great job.
5/5.

Brought tears to my eyes. So sad. your
poems are like stories. It sucks that you
have to feel pain to write good and i feel guilty liking your poems , you know what i mean? i hope you uderstand. cy

Wow this is realy good i presume the reason you wrote this is as is in the poem??(if that makes sense) u yea i liked it iv been having a ruff time with my parents at the moment but my teachers at school are helping me heaps so its not so hard....5/5

Aww.. this poem is so sad, it makes it good, How is it going? I'm feel so sorry to you... it had so much emotion, it was brilliant, loved it..... it's so touching...

WOW... I really like it!! It's sad but amazing!!! Great job!!

Awww..Thats so sad! But great writing! Kepp it up!

Very good :)

I remember writing this a long time ago..
ah. some things still havent changed.