Awwwwwwwwwwwwww...thats so sad. it makes me wanna cry! 5/5
a few rhyming errors but its still really good!

xo kisses xo

Wow!!!!! thats all i can say, this poem is really nice!!! i almost started crying...

angel =D

I loved it it was absolutly wonderful. heart breaking, sad, and sweet. it was fantastic. keep it up. i cant wait to read the rest of your work!!!!