Wow this is amazing, you really make things work. =]

Your poem is packed full of emotions and does a wonderful job of letting the reader feel your pain.

Thanks for making me stop for a moment and remember that I need to tell those I love how I feel. We need to tell those close to us that we love them every chance we can.

One change I would make is this:
"We have the rest of our lives to live...
My god, I mean, you were only a kid!
We were meant to grow up with each other,
We were MEANT for one another!"

I would change the very last line of this stanze to read:
We were ment to be together.

Other than that one little tidbit you have really grabbed your readers.

Very nice job. I am sorry for your lose. I hope that soon you will be able to look up and continue on with life.

--Sher