by skynerraw May 15, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
He suddenly lit up the room |
by CHOKE
Awwww, this one is so cute ;p |
I like the words u chose for this one.. vey good job |
by Vanessa
Well written for a 12 yr old u have alot of talent, i wish I would have been able to write like that at 12. anyway, the flow was a little off, and the staza with yup in it felt a little forced other than that u did an excellent job 5/5 |
Overall it was good. |
by Startle Me
I think this is cute. |