The flow was a tad bit off
But if you fix some lines it would be really good
I liked the emotion in this poem
but then again how can u not show great emotion
in a love poem

I think this is cute.
Just the emotions I felt into this one.
It made me wish I could stay
The same age
And feel the way you felt.
For a 12 year old,
You're not so bad.
I was expecting sloppy grammar
And cliched writing.
It WAS a bit cliched.
But not totally.
It was pretty good, I have to admit.

Overall it was good.

'I stare at my math book
As the teacher looks up
I sneak a look
And not to my surprise, yup'

That rhyming seemed forced. ^^

Other than that, it was great. 5/5

[Sarah]

Well written for a 12 yr old u have alot of talent, i wish I would have been able to write like that at 12. anyway, the flow was a little off, and the staza with yup in it felt a little forced other than that u did an excellent job 5/5

I like the words u chose for this one.. vey good job

Awwww, this one is so cute ;p
it's so frickin adorable
my favorite stanza is,
"He looked over too
I look down rolling my eyes
I want to say "I'm falling in love with you."
Much to my surprise"
5/5.