I Love You [Acrostic]

by skynerraw   May 15, 2007


I smile sweetly at you
Loving everything that you do
Outside we sit under the tree
Very gentle winds caressing our faces
Every touch is brilliant, every single word
You laugh, close your eyes, and smile
Open for anyone to see our love
Under this tree, I know I love you

*-Sky-*

This is my first acrostic poem, and I just wanted to see if I can do it, please r/r/c so I can figure out ways to improve this one, or my next ones :D Thanks

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  • 17 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Lovely acrostic poem, it's a lot different from your other poems. but i love it just the same. 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Well done, expecailly for your first one of this style. really it is sometimes hard to write some of these poems. expecially on such a cliche subject. 5/5

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