How innovative! I hardly could pick out the lines which stood out for me, because each one of them signifies a deeper and more profound meaning. I love how it suggests a desire longing to be personified and yet at the same time it hinders the subject to achive this. I can't put my thoughts thoroughly, considering the poem's indistinguishable roots. Nevertheless, it was a very pleasurable read. Thank you for sharing!
Take care now.

I know exactly how you feel, we are deff. in the same boat on this one. this is y i always tell u things like this because ur the only one who excepts them.

Ehh, ok chloe. listen! stop feeling bad about liking him...true, true, he's a jerk and he says uncalled for things that he shouldnt ever say and stuff. but i mean, its not ur fault! u like him because...well because u cant help it. and i mean, that means you actualyl DO like him. so just, don't feel so confined by our offhand remarks about how much we hate him...
lol we dont mean anything by it, of course we all dont mind u liking him, that would be stupid and completely not-good-friend-ish of us. lol.