by Fsams May 15, 2007
category :
Fun, humor /
for kids
Out in an isolated land |
by Jiyaa
Haha this ones a great poem expressin a lovely story. |
Helter-skelter huh? lol.. I have no idea what that means nor am I going to go run for a dictionary. Poem's idea wasn't very unique. But your rhyming ,flow, word choice, emotion... Was all yours. And you scored 5's in all of those. Great Job |
by Unwitted
This oem really shows your creativity Fsams. Keep up the good work. |
I enjoyed this poem coz i already know the story plus it is nicely put into a poem. wow |
by Yuna
I liked this story. Poems that have stories are really cool. It reminded me of this movie called "A bugs life". It had sorta the same idea. I loved the different words you used to describe what was happening. The poem as a hole was very well put together. In the end, does the ant help the grasshopper out to teach it a lesson? Great job! |