Very cute, i think everyone has heard the story of the grasshopper and the ant and to see it put to rhyme was excellent =)
5/5
*Gem*

P.S. I'm proud of the poem cos.. i guess i just am, lol

What a wonderful lesson, Yet a beutiful tale of friendship :)
Great!
Take care Cindy

Excellent poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

Great Poemx

I liked this story. Poems that have stories are really cool. It reminded me of this movie called "A bugs life". It had sorta the same idea. I loved the different words you used to describe what was happening. The poem as a hole was very well put together. In the end, does the ant help the grasshopper out to teach it a lesson? Great job!

I enjoyed this poem coz i already know the story plus it is nicely put into a poem. wow

This oem really shows your creativity Fsams. Keep up the good work.

Helter-skelter huh? lol.. I have no idea what that means nor am I going to go run for a dictionary. Poem's idea wasn't very unique. But your rhyming ,flow, word choice, emotion... Was all yours. And you scored 5's in all of those. Great Job

5/5

Haha this ones a great poem expressin a lovely story.
I think kids wud rly enjoy it.