by Fsams May 15, 2007
category :
Life, society /
patriotism
Like a flower I bloom |
by Jiyaa
This is a great message for the entire cosmo. |
You put a lot of emotion into this one. Your rhyming wasn't forced at all. This poem is beautiful. I really liked that last line. It had a lot of power behind it. Amazing Job |
by Robert
This was an emotionally packed poem and the words were right on I enjoyed this piece alot keep up the great work Plot121 |
by Nix
Topic of this poem is great. It is very sad and you described emotions excellently. Some lines are amazing. 5/5 |
by Anaisthitos
This poem was another one of my favorite of yours. I especially liked the lines |