Nice one. I liked it. It had a nice flow but some of the bigger words took away from it a little. 5/5

This is superb poetry. Really its beautiful. Worth 5/5 indeed

Beautifully written once again, the flow was a little off in some places but noithing major, the word choice was excellent, and the emotion was strong again you have earned 5/5

This poem was another one of my favorite of yours. I especially liked the lines

"But my first words wasn't "Mother"
Neither mother nor father
But only a question "Why?''
I'm cornered alone to die"

and it also had a very powerfull ending. excellent job

5/5

Topic of this poem is great. It is very sad and you described emotions excellently. Some lines are amazing. 5/5

This was an emotionally packed poem and the words were right on I enjoyed this piece alot keep up the great work Plot121

You put a lot of emotion into this one. Your rhyming wasn't forced at all. This poem is beautiful. I really liked that last line. It had a lot of power behind it. Amazing Job

5/5

This is a great message for the entire cosmo.
I loved it.
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