Hmm interesting poem David. The way you structured it made emphasis on some of the lines, to me anyway, and the flow was really good. It's such a happy poem, it made me smile knowing you are so full of love. Well done on another awesome poem. =] 5/5

Tammie

Well thats a sincere word of love, and hope that person u love, are truly lucky! its really hard to find people whom we loved and be loved,, w/ a true feelings.... and w/ all of their hearts. but ur feelings here very appreciated at the same time i can feel it was truly express ur feelings and emotion to someone u love too.. it was powerful msg and very worded. so over all i think it written well and great putting some expressions in ur poet. 5/5

god bless!

That was beautifull. i loved it!

5/5 excellent poem. it was very well writen and i liked your style in this poem. it was different. i love different. :) the repetition in this poem worked very well and all together it was very well done. :)

-Lith

I liked the structure. All your emotions were brought on nicely. A sweet one. Flow was great. Interesting write, different. Amazing one! Keep up the great work. 5/5

A beautiful write ,I loved it ,well done.

David
What a lovely poem. Your love really shines in this piece.

I am love struck
My heart belongs to you

My heart sings your beauty
Your presence, your grace

These lines are so sweet.
Take Care Cindy

Very up lifting, wonderful, brings a smile to my face and i like to smile

Very up lifting, wonderful, brings a smile to my face and i like to smile

Very up lifting, wonderful, brings a smile to my face and i like to smile

Very up lifting, wonderful, brings a smile to my face and i like to smile

Very up lifting, wonderful, brings a smile to my face and i like to smile

Ohhhh.
this is such a sweet and happy poem, it almost makes me cry when i read stuff like this because it's so beautiful and happy.....
wow. 5/5
gabriella

This is such a wonderful write! you are a very talented person! 5/5 please rate and comment some of mine!

-Ashley

Wat is ur second name?

Hey! nice peom!!

This is great poem! I really love it! Keep going on good job!
-Kath

Wow that is a great peom!!!!! Keep up the good work.

xoxoxo
Jess

Wow tht was very nice you should stop by my page and read sum of my poem i am new on here so i will post more 5/5

Very touching