Imperfections [Tetractys]

This could be a great quote.
It's a true fact, though.
Some people get shallow.

Right now, I'm pretty heavy, like... fat, dawg.
So this kind of brought up my spirtits a bit.

Thanmk you :]

Wonderful message with impact ! I love this form.

Beautifully conveyed ....
Luanne

I love this style of poetry i have written several myself but havn't posted them on this site yet. The whole poem was written with such beauty. It was short short but held so much emotions. truely beautiful. Well done~mel

Brava m'dear!
I have yet to try this format abd you've shown how to do it so beautifully..
I love the ending, it was so poignant and most importantly, so true..
Well done sweets, short, sweet simple yet so powerful!
5/5
*Gem*

Oh well done, the love and affection in this short and well thought out poem was amazing! the end line is very true and only true lovers can find that out.

well done and keep writing, 5/5 always. David