Wow.. amazing..

Finishing the look with a smile, to hide what people don't know.

It's true. Just a simple smile can hide sooo many things. Excellent poem... very powerful and I'm sure many can relate. And about my poem that said Im "sick" of these people.. as you said, people have their opinions and I had my reasons for writing that poem.. but thanks anyway.. nice poem.. and thanks for the comment =]

Theres so many people who hide behind a smile everyday, and most never take the time to notice. I can;t imagine how many times I passed a kid like that in the halls of school, but never looked twice. amazing job 5/5

I also thought this was amazing, sad yet truthful and to the point, 5/5

The flawless flow, and the storyline imagery made this a very moving poem for me.

The topic seemed some what cliche to me although i found you pulled it off beautifully and i know its hard to come up with a topic to write about which you havnt already done or which others havnt already written about. The flow was good in this poem. I liked the long lines they were easier to read. Good vocab. Well done with this poem~mel

Wow!!!.....beautiful poem..n soo true......just a smiling...n it has so many tears behind it......great work...powerful..n lovely!..sad n simple though..yet well penned!
Kp up the good wrk!
xxPoojaxx

"Everyday to hide, she does her best, to make her day worthwhile;
She shines her eyes, and glosses her lips, tied together with a smile."

^Very good. With a strong and solid flow to compliment the rhyme in this piece, you've ended the poem effortlessly in a smooth and fitting manner. Once again, the imagery works terrifically throughout this piece. Very well done :).

Very powerful ending! great job on this.

The flow was great throughout and the rhyming was wonderful..

This is true.. lots of people have masks up and you dont even know. its sad. anyway 5/5

Teeth to go. ? = is that like, removable teeth?

her of the youth.= stole her of the youth (no period since it goes down to the other line)

no one has = nobody has

Cute, cliche poem written in an original, metsa-mets way. Honestly, despite the fact that I did enjoy your poem it seems as if it wasn't that... powerful. Some words took away from it, and despite that I loved the ending. I don't really know what else to say, well written =]

5/5
~Stephen White

The poem was just a little confusing to me, since the girl is so depressed, yet know one really knows but they just stare anyways... I thought the length of your lines was a little too much, but other than that it was a pretty decent poem.