I liked this one. I totally agree with you on this one. 5/5

Very nice advise. I like it very much. Could you plse read my Tom and Jerry

This is a great free verse that you nicelt showed your feelings though. It kept me thinking the whole time. Excellent job, and beautiful wording.

5/5

You had alot of ideas in this piece but it was hard to go from one to the other. The terminoligy was hard to follow so it left a void in this piece but I think of you made it more fore everyone to understand in vocabulary this would be a better piece all around Plot121

I gues this poem is v importan as it shows a reality. I like ur poems dear. n i wil write more.