This was rather delightful to read.
It had amused me at the least sense.
=]

Be well.

It was an ok poem. I didn't think it was funny untill the very end of the poem and I don't think that, that many people would be able to understand it because of the way it is worded. 4/5

Ha ha ha this is very hilarious. The rhyme scheme is so simple but beautiful.

Wow. the rhyming was very simple
yet still so effective, how do you
come up with all these. nicely done,
thought it was great. 5/5

nikki

This poem was really good but it doesn't fit it the funny section. then again i wouldn't know where to put it sorry.