Comments : I Still Love You

  • 17 years ago

    by bRiNgMeToLiFe

    Its really good.

  • 17 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Great job. I like this poem. It's sad but truthful. I use to feel like this but i got over it. 5/5
    -vino

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    So true to love and to life. one small mistake in an otherwise perfect poem
    Are relationship one day did end,
    Are should be our
    The flow was magnificant, the word choice was excelent, and the emtion was strong, and raw. Perfectly penned, and beautifully written 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    "Are relationship one day did end," (sic) (= Our is misspelled in the line.)

    "And before loosing you was my only fright." (sic) (= Losing is misspelled.)

    Genuine sensations attached in this piece have truly tugged my heart. I adore it. =]

    It was rather bittersweet, though. Nice piece, nonetheless.

    -Marian

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Beautiful poem!
    It was sad yet it was filled with beauty..sweet poem..penned well..the flow was good and the emotion was well conveyed
    Good job!

    5/5

    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    I hate it when ppl break your heart and you still love them with all the little pieces
    -laura-