Better Than Me
by Rach May 15, 2007
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In the 8 years i've known you...I've felt so much for you. My life surrounded you...but you never noticed me. You didn't notice me one little bit...there was always someone better. Then she was gone. We were best friends...you said you loved me more than anything...then someone else better came along...you left me feeling worse than before...I felt even more alone. |
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17 years ago
by LiL K
I like the short sweetness of this poem. I think if you would organize your free verse into stanzas you would get a lot better feedback. (Some people don't have the creativity to see the talent in free verse writing!) I loved it, keep up the good work!
And thanks for your comment on my poem "The Simple Things You Do"- I appreciate it!
~MuCh LoVe
