Savior

Amazing!!!! I agree with charisma and gem- beautiful, suberb. I loved the opening lines:
I want to fall asleep in your arms
And wake up in your eyes
....
The switch there is just great, and the phrase" wake up in your eyes" holds so much meaning. I can feel the longing in your words.
another favorite line is
please be there when i call your name.

you have mirrored so exactly what i have felt many times. what we have all felt. truly an outstanding job.

Aw, thats so sweet.
I esspecialy liked the switching from complete opposites in the "I need your heart to be my sanctuary and your love to be my playground" i really like that line a lot
that was beautiful. really truly beautiful. great write

WOW! Amazing poem Midnight ! AMAZING!!! SUPERB!!!! 5/5 for sure.

I want my tears to warrant your kiss
And that kiss to stop my cries
And your love to be my playground

Those lines were my fav!!! Truly amazing!
Charisma*

How can this not have comments yet, it was so beautiful and so heartfelt.

"I need your heart to be my sanctuary
And your love to be my playground
I need you to totally complete me
And my loss to be what you found"

I loved that stanza sweets, it was just... beautiful. The word that keeps springing to mind.
The excellent rhyme scheme and flow just perfects an already fabulous piece
Well done
5/5
*Gem*