I love this poem...you're awesome for making this...

Wow...that was really good. Very well written, so much saddness. Got shocked at the sister part. I Loved the ending, it was perfect. On this line:

"I still love, Baby,"

Did you mean to say I still love you, baby? or not? if not then oops. Great poem! 5/5

Excellent!

"As your struggle ends
It gives way to stillness
I whisper and smile,
Completely guiltless:

"I will always love you
Until your last breath
I love you, my Angel,
I love you to death""

Those last two stanza's were outstanding and totally in a league of thier own!
It was so amazing. Ah, i can't say enough adjectives! lmao
Pure excellence, i loved it!
5/5
*Gem*