by Monica AKA Mika May 15, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
new love
You know that feeling that you get when you start talking to someone new, |
by Sora
Wow. i can so relate to this poem, this poem is amazing. keep up the wonderful work! =] |
by Javier
THIS WAS AMAZING I LOVE THIS ONE SOO MUCH I CANT BELIEVE HOW MUCH I CAN RELATE IT WAS JUST THE WAY YOU PUT YOUR WORDS THAT MADE ME FALL IN LOVE WITH THIS POEM I FEEL LIKE I CAN READ THIS OVER AND OVER AND NEVER GET SICK OF IT. 5 out of 5 |
by Alissa
This had a very great meaning but your flow was a little off. I suggest to stick with one thing, if you're going to have a rhyming stanza, you should make everything rhyming. It just distracts the reader from the whole meaning. But this poem had great emotion, so it sort of covered the flow. All in all, this was a pretty good poem. |
by Fsams
Someone to be there for you and to hold you tight, |
This applies to me rite now, im going through every word that u have written here. it is a great poem, and it gives me a new perspective on the girl that is trying so hard for me. thank you! |