Scared...

by Monica AKA Mika   May 15, 2007


You know that feeling that you get when you start talking to someone new,
Your excited, but scared that they will hurt you...

You start looking for things wrong with them because they might be like all the rest,
Because you want that perfect someone, you want only the very best...

You start thinking about your past and all thats been done,
You wanna go back and fix your mistakes but then you wouldn't have the mistakes that you learned from...

Because now you know what to do and what you don't,
You tell your friends you'll get over them, but you know you really wont...

They hurt you so bad so now its hard for you to let someone new in,
That someone tries so hard, but you know they will never win...

Because your scared....

You don't want your heart broken again by another,
You don't want a friend or a pimp you want a lover...

Someone to be there for you and to hold you tight,
Someone to make you feel like everything is alright...

But your scared...

But here is my question for you,
How are you going to find someone to love you, when thats exactly what you wont let them do...?

******Dedicated to all those heart broken people who struggle everyday to get over that one who broke their heart.....******

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    Wow. i can so relate to this poem, this poem is amazing. keep up the wonderful work! =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Javier

    THIS WAS AMAZING I LOVE THIS ONE SOO MUCH I CANT BELIEVE HOW MUCH I CAN RELATE IT WAS JUST THE WAY YOU PUT YOUR WORDS THAT MADE ME FALL IN LOVE WITH THIS POEM I FEEL LIKE I CAN READ THIS OVER AND OVER AND NEVER GET SICK OF IT. 5 out of 5

  • 17 years ago

    by Alissa

    This had a very great meaning but your flow was a little off. I suggest to stick with one thing, if you're going to have a rhyming stanza, you should make everything rhyming. It just distracts the reader from the whole meaning. But this poem had great emotion, so it sort of covered the flow. All in all, this was a pretty good poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Someone to be there for you and to hold you tight,
    Someone to make you feel like everything is alright...

    Superb lines flowing so well and well put together. The whole poem is good.

    Tc
    fsams

  • 17 years ago

    by PoeticJustice

    This applies to me rite now, im going through every word that u have written here. it is a great poem, and it gives me a new perspective on the girl that is trying so hard for me. thank you!